Thursday, February 5, 2015

EXCERPT: A Youth Stuntman and Daredevil



IVAN re-enters the abandoned house.
Rizzo, Alfred and Leon now became nervous.
"Ivan man, what the hell are you doing?" Rizzo and Leon both asked.
"Damn." Alfred whispers.

    Running up the stairs of this former residence smelling of damp, but yet molded drywall, Ivan quickly reaches the second floor. Going left, he reaches the living room. Peering through a window, he looks down on his friends as they anticipate his next move. Even the two blossomed females Cassandra and Justine are concerned.

   Standing in a narrow desecrated hallway near a bathroom, Ivan gives himself a running start.

   Dashing through the house, he makes his jump from a window in the center of the living room. Running and scrambling, Leon and Rizzo place more mats in front of the building.

  Rolling and flipping, Ivan lands. He is unscathed.

  After a brief moment of silence, the remaining spectators (namely his friends) applaud.

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